All Comments on 'Lil Fix It Man ~'

the lonely hearts ...you have designed a wonderful outline of sharing the gifts of

light...ty..big sigh...blue

Not sure about all your line breaks. Some don't seem quite right--but not bad.

This is a good stanza. I added a few suggestions for editing:

First stop was a lonely mom

(with) two boys, no father. All she ask(s)

(is)to measure the sidewalk(,)

put a number on all the cracks

that ke(ep) cementing her fate.

I agree with blue, gifts of the heart (~_~) a wonderful and touching poem <grin nice one RF,