All Comments on 'Little By Little'

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AngelineAngelineover 16 years ago
Love this poem!

I can tell you were playing with words and rhyme and rhythm as you wrote it. "Butterscotch" is one word (tell me if you're sick of me pointing out typos and I'll stop lol). The word choices and structure make the poem feel both well-integrated and circular, which fit the theme really well.

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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lorencinolorencinoover 16 years ago

Somehow it seems to be about how we really bumble our ways through life in precise unconnected acts that finally get us to the end. Whatever it's really about, for me it's a perfect little precise poem about imprecision.

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