All Comments on 'Little Texas Tornado'

seems like i've heard this a time or two from you

being a little tornado is just what i do

but this little texas tornado will always love you

Sounds like a take charge woman

"wearing nothing but seduction;"

By the time you figure out what's happened

She's got your head reelin' in confusion.

and i'm not sure how it did.......i love this little tornado you produced......nicely done........don

of a Texas Tornado! You're alive and that's all that matters, Art! Although I DO know it was you that suffered some minor injuries... "Leaving a male, in her wind blown trail, ridden, tattered and torn."...I am sure, in time, you will be strong enough to take on another Texas tornado <grinin' ear to ear>. Again, your talent for telling tales shines. Or... WAS it a tale??? <wink>

VERY curious about that

Vixxx

"She'll blow you a kiss, from lucious lips,

winking an eye."

thanks for the sentiment and the lines Arty babe...too funny since i always sign with a kiss!

Love ya,

Kisses...

Lucious

great poem and great time doing it so that poem could come to life. lol

love always,

nin-

that blow away the mind.

Yee-Hah

Art, note comment below mine

whad i say?

This thing does not have a dime's worth of pretension in it,

a good thing, a very good thing

Fuck it, a double Yee-Hah

GOOD!! I like how some lines have rhymeing in themselves. An other good one!!

nice work Art...Sabina

A light and brezzy

poem with some craking

imagery.

Loved it.

~ J

Nice little poem. I love this line:

wearing nothing but seduction.

Good words.

Cute and clever... I loved this line:

Clothes will fly in a tornado surprise,

wearing nothing but seduction.

Thank you for the journey..

Du~