All Comments on 'Long Distance Lover'

by cavu182

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
you have great controll

in your writing the poem seems to bounce along at a nice pace, instils the portent of desire and a little apprehension with the final lines.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Really well done

The poem was really well crafted and, as another carhartt wearing long distance lover, the content was perfect.

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