All Comments on 'Long Drive'

and so evocative in its detail! Love everything about this poem, but especially these lines:

I stare in the mirror

For a hint

Of your lipstick

Checking the corners

Of my mouth

For a deeper red

Yum. The last three lines also really struck me. I'm copying and saving this one. Thanks, Bel. Great work. LJ

almost that same routse, Miami to Portland maine, wishing I had someone to kiss... all the way there :)