All Comments on 'Longing'

by triara

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bluebellbluebellabout 15 years ago
I felt this one too, perhaps slightly lower down

Were you crawling around inside my head? ;) Very well-captured, the spirit of that sort of relationship; the power, the boundaries, the pleasure. I enjoyed this very much and your first stanza was excellent. This was mentioned along with I Wish in the poetry forum (repeating myself here, heh) if you want to stop by. Thank you for sharing!

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