All Comments on 'Losing the submissive'

by Kajira Callista

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Very nice

This shows the emotion well without wallowing in pity. Beautiful.

DiJiTDiJiTalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful-Thats all I can say

You never cease to amaze me KC. You just keep getting better all the time. I look forward to more from you.

bearleebearleealmost 20 years ago
Interesting

I'll put more of a comment on this at another time-liked it alot as in loved it. Something troubling about it though and I can't quite put my finger on it. Either that a breakout for the writer!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Know the feeling

KC...you speak of truth that all have felt probably at one time or another. Some more than others thats true. But remember, when it seems the darkest, hold true to yourself. Believe...hope, and in the end, those who matter most will be there when you need them.

I remain,

Thesandman

sybilrosesybilrosealmost 20 years ago
Such a lonesome sound

But you are good at expressing it.

Give it time to heal

Victoria_2001_02769Victoria_2001_02769almost 20 years ago
Your words touched that chord in me;

Aah ~ Cara Mia...

the chord in me that only you know how to touch. You reached in and plucked it tenderly, but with that deep sense of strong emotion. In each piece of you that you "lose" ~ I find an answering piece in me.

I weep for what this means to you... your words, so deep, so poignant, yet true. The present feeling of sadness... the deep sense of loss that is felt... for that which could not be... is, indeed, touched upon... but you take your feelings up and hold them to you ~ as you retreat to the darkness... that which is your "safe place" to you...

Bellisima, Cara ~ bellisima!

TheRiddlerTheRiddleralmost 20 years ago
I wonder

why your comments always leave me feeling like an autumn breeze...you know the ones...they come just before the winter...that last gasp of air that rushes over the hillsides and strips the trees of their remaining leaves.

There is something missing in you KC...I am not sure just what it is but I hope you find it...before it is too late!

~hellbaby~~hellbaby~over 19 years ago
I known Feeling

Your words reflect a feeling I know all too well. It always sounds too depressing when I attempt to put it in writing though, you've managed to make it be OK and not pitiful.Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Losing the submissive ..

Kajira - very honest portrayal Thank you for sharing Sambarrow614

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