by Kajira Callista
This shows the emotion well without wallowing in pity. Beautiful.
You never cease to amaze me KC. You just keep getting better all the time. I look forward to more from you.
I'll put more of a comment on this at another time-liked it alot as in loved it. Something troubling about it though and I can't quite put my finger on it. Either that a breakout for the writer!
KC...you speak of truth that all have felt probably at one time or another. Some more than others thats true. But remember, when it seems the darkest, hold true to yourself. Believe...hope, and in the end, those who matter most will be there when you need them.
I remain,
Thesandman
But you are good at expressing it.
Give it time to heal
Aah ~ Cara Mia...
the chord in me that only you know how to touch. You reached in and plucked it tenderly, but with that deep sense of strong emotion. In each piece of you that you "lose" ~ I find an answering piece in me.
I weep for what this means to you... your words, so deep, so poignant, yet true. The present feeling of sadness... the deep sense of loss that is felt... for that which could not be... is, indeed, touched upon... but you take your feelings up and hold them to you ~ as you retreat to the darkness... that which is your "safe place" to you...
Bellisima, Cara ~ bellisima!
why your comments always leave me feeling like an autumn breeze...you know the ones...they come just before the winter...that last gasp of air that rushes over the hillsides and strips the trees of their remaining leaves.
There is something missing in you KC...I am not sure just what it is but I hope you find it...before it is too late!
Your words reflect a feeling I know all too well. It always sounds too depressing when I attempt to put it in writing though, you've managed to make it be OK and not pitiful.Thanks!
Kajira - very honest portrayal Thank you for sharing Sambarrow614