Lost and Found

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Lost and Found

I lost you
somewhere between
St. Louis
and Toledo.

For eleven months exactly
I have searched
for you
between pages of Wordsworth
and bars of Joplin,
and even beneath
your Best Buy Catalogues.

Our pigeons on Main Street
don’t recognize your picture,
but I never was good
with crayons.
I posted “WANTED” posters
on the poles we used to
lean against
and in the doorways
where we waited
in the rain.
You’re still missing.
Or is it me?

But I would
forgive you
if you came home.
I walked back to the river,
which finally receded,
you’ll be glad to know;

I think you must have
floated away with it,
clinging to a shingle
of someone else’s
house of dreams.

I apologize
if I pushed you under.
The mahogany waters are rough.
I know. You pulled me out once,
remember?

COPYRIGHT: trendyredhead 1993

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lostandfounderlostandfounderalmost 20 years ago
Meloncholy

Like watching a paper boat float down a river.

Quiet, gentle and sad.

Very nice.

Good title.:)

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
piercing my heart..

i lived that poem once..hell, if i wanted to be honest i'd tell you i still was.

that was so beautifully touching.

sad and yet romantic, very nice!

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Outstanding...

...from start to finish. Powerful and phrased cleanly and with first-class surety.

perksperksalmost 20 years ago
perkspective

Our pigeons on Main Street

don?t recognize your picture,

I posted ?WANTED? posters

on the poles we used to

lean against

and in the doorways

where we waited

in the rain;

but I never was good

with crayons.

You?re still missing.

Or is it me?

that's the only change I would make, and it's so slight in comparison to the magnitude of your imagery. The emotion of this poem floors me. I'm in awe. This is a great piece of writing.

EumenidesEumenidesalmost 20 years ago
Eu's Take

I think you must have

floated away with it,

clinging to a shingle

of someone else?s

house of dreams

This was the pinnacle of this great poem. There are so many parts I want to quote, and so much I would like to dissect within it, but I can't because a greater portion of me just wants to inhale the poem as a whole. Great images, even better than the first poem I read of yours. I'm saving this one. *smiles*

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