All Comments on 'Lost and Found'

is very vivid and clear. A stirring read. Thank you.

this is so full of loss and sadness and lonliness.

Wonderful stuff

makes me so sad...

I knew this was going to be a terrific poem.

I think you must have

floated away with it,

clinging to a shingle

of someone else?s

house of dreams

This was the pinnacle of this great poem. There are so many parts I want to quote, and so much I would like to dissect within it, but I can't because a greater portion of me just wants to inhale the poem as a whole. Great images, even better than the first poem I read of yours. I'm saving this one. *smiles*

Our pigeons on Main Street

don?t recognize your picture,

I posted ?WANTED? posters

on the poles we used to

lean against

and in the doorways

where we waited

in the rain;

but I never was good

with crayons.

You?re still missing.

Or is it me?

that's the only change I would make, and it's so slight in comparison to the magnitude of your imagery. The emotion of this poem floors me. I'm in awe. This is a great piece of writing.

...from start to finish. Powerful and phrased cleanly and with first-class surety.

i lived that poem once..hell, if i wanted to be honest i'd tell you i still was.

that was so beautifully touching.

sad and yet romantic, very nice!

Like watching a paper boat float down a river.

Quiet, gentle and sad.

Very nice.

Good title.:)