All Comments on 'Louder Than Love'

Wow!!!

Wow is right!

Trapped in a place she didn't want to be

Dying from a love that was filled with hate;

All she was has been torn asunder

Her only peace is the gun's last thunder.

A most powerful write with which to explode upon the scene.

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with a twist that shook me until I was almost rigid when I read the following words: "Not hearing little footsteps, nor seeing me there."... What a terrible thing for a child to see.. Brilliant, extremely well done poem.