- Erotic Poetry
- Love
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Click hereTeasin my fingers against her flesh,
sharing the same breath,
this moment together, ours forever.
To gaze deep into her eyes,
feeling the warmth of her skin,
lips caressing in sweet affection.
She's simply the drug that I feine for,
around her, a high that never ends,
only she can fill this need inside.
Over her I move, covering completely,
beneath she squirms, yet grins and giggles,
driving our arousal with the sound of her submission.
Once more we taste ourselves on the other,
hints of earliar activity lingering,
heat rising between us for what is to come.
She tips and rolls and wiggles till just right,
sneaking me there till finally connected,
we both still the gasp as we become one.
Tangling ourselves up in delicious embrace,
bodies entwining in an inferno of desire,
till finally an eruption ignites us both!
In that moment, completion, fulfillment,
calming breaths consume as I pull you close,
cuddling, till you turn and look at me with your shining azure orbs.
Mischieviously, you ask, "Can we do it again?"
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Tailalmost 20 years agoTo feel it then write it, why change it? Nice reead and thank you, I understood it and felt it. Some can't!
YDDalmost 20 years agoYou might want to edit some typos to make this poem read without eye pauses.
edits:
"feine" = ?
"earliar" = "earlier"
"Mischieviously" = "Mischievously"
suggestions:
"we both"
"us both!"
"we" and "us" imply "both". If you must differentiate try a word like "each".
"shining azure orbs" - Does anything really need to be said?
