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All Comments on 'Love Makes the World Go Round'
by demure101
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Ashesh9over 11 years agoSun ,none , begun ...
Floor ,for ,more ....gold , sold , told ---- Rhyme makes poetry Time ?!!
tazz317over 11 years agoWILL LACK OF LOVE DESTROY AND CEASE THE ACTION
or are there different sets of circumstances. TK U MLJ LV NV
Ashesh9over 11 years agoDemure , i sincerely apologize if you thought i criticized the poem
i was just pointing out the rhymin' ! ( without any hidden connotations whatsoever)
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