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glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
This one almost made me blush.

Like inadvertently interrupted a very intimate moment between two lovers.

TarakinTarakinover 16 years ago
Very good!

Very good, I just don't understand why it's just "a" (one) loving gaze at the end.

FallenfromgraceFallenfromgraceover 16 years ago
I

I like that you chose your words well, a little insight into a moment already begun and almost over. I liked it :)

starrkersstarrkersabout 16 years ago
Simple

and yet strongly evocative. Nicely done!

SuzysboySuzysboyover 12 years ago

Sweet as Haiku...

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