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by JCSTREET

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YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
"that sharp, high iron smell"

Another extremely strong piece.

Even if may not share the writer's viewpoint

you must be swept along and drawn into his views

when you read such passages as:

"and it is all so quaint, there is nothing

like old war photographs to make us

smile, because

the blood is dry and

no longer has that sharp, high iron smell, because

one does not disrobe at the river

to find bone shards

fecal matter, curly worms of

intestine"

Another solid "5" and a MUST READ" by this poet.

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