by tungtied2u
Two things I like about you, your sense of rhythm, and everything I reread your poetry, the meaning seems to shift, I was going to say I don't like this (blah, blah) but it seems like it was there for a reason, I haven't quite got a fix on it, and that is a very good thing. IMHO
Great read, nice rhythm, crisp images, pulling back the curtain for a glimpse of a day in the life...brrr...thanks.
So many mundane details missed in getting ready for another day's daily grind, the worst part being the scraping of ice off the car's windows.