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Corpse_rideralmost 13 years agoMasterful
Good erotic poem.
Not sure about 'butterflys thrashing' Also I think it would stronger if you changed 'slit' to 'inside me' - we already know the action being alluded to, so the graphic and rather crude 'slit' detracts.
Kobaalmost 13 years agoWell done! As a Dom I would squeal with delight upon receiving such a tribute! Beautiful!
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