Master mind

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But did he know that i saw him first?
he did not.
and does he know that i fell inlove first?
he does not.
A stud he thinks he is
but he is.
that he swept me off my feet
thats what he thinks
with his not so charming ways
just the way i like it.

so who's the master now boy?

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DesejoDesejoover 10 years ago

Dreamy, slightly Yoda-esque overtones. The use of 'boy' in the final line is interesting. I wonder at the use of the lower case i - especially when paired with the final question - the lower case implies a lack of self importance. So who is master? Dunno. Nicely done overall.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
nice turn at the end

you are getting there

5ed 'cause it's christmas?

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