All Comments on 'Master mind'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
nice turn at the end

you are getting there

5ed 'cause it's christmas?

DesejoDesejoover 10 years ago

Dreamy, slightly Yoda-esque overtones. The use of 'boy' in the final line is interesting. I wonder at the use of the lower case i - especially when paired with the final question - the lower case implies a lack of self importance. So who is master? Dunno. Nicely done overall.

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