All Comments on 'Masters Sweet Embrace'

I'm glad you enjoy your master's attention enough to share.

Structurally you might have a stronger poem if you kept your meter (syllable count and emphasis in each line) more consistent. You might also consider joining the couplets into stanzas of four lines since that is how you present your rhymes.

"Masters" should be "Master's"

the way it was written

Takes us step by step .

erotic without being over-wordy and too descriptive

Nice job

Thank you