All Comments on 'Max just sat there'

by jd4george

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
I saw

this perfectly.

Great work ...if you could find that view..it'd make a great illustrated poem.

irishcatsmeowirishcatsmeowover 19 years ago
From a cat's view....

...what a great way to capture a moment in time. I like the feline references, especially, Peeping Tom. Yes, cats see what we don't see...part of their mystery and allure. And you know...i don't believe for one second that Max was 'just' sitting there. Meow!

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Someday

I will have a collection of all the things you wrote

that I wished I had,

just came in from a walk

"seeing things I cannot see,

and the stars above ignore us

as silence settles in."

Damn

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
Damn

I loved this poem, such a great story and slice of life from a place I've never been, thank you!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
max

jd...you have an amazing style of writing that

always sends me into a cucklebone itch

or thinking with head scratches...witty

and Hi Max~

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