by jd4george
this perfectly.
Great work ...if you could find that view..it'd make a great illustrated poem.
...what a great way to capture a moment in time. I like the feline references, especially, Peeping Tom. Yes, cats see what we don't see...part of their mystery and allure. And you know...i don't believe for one second that Max was 'just' sitting there. Meow!
I will have a collection of all the things you wrote
that I wished I had,
just came in from a walk
"seeing things I cannot see,
and the stars above ignore us
as silence settles in."
Damn
I loved this poem, such a great story and slice of life from a place I've never been, thank you!
jd...you have an amazing style of writing that
always sends me into a cucklebone itch
or thinking with head scratches...witty
and Hi Max~