by Sinsualmind
a wonderful picture, so vivid, so caring, you can feel the bond between you.
Some very clever rhymes, and internal stuff going on.
( caught red handed was great)
and the " street" style doesn't detract from it at all.
It's smart and funny and touching.
You have a lot of potential.
I hope you stick around and show us what you can do.
Thank you
I really liked this, the way I seem to like all your poetry, which reminds me of hot days in the city, sometimes - the feel of concrete baking under my ass and the sounds of a thousand people milling about. That's the flavor I take away from your poems.