All Comments on 'Me & Her, She & I'

by Sinsualmind

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
You painted

a wonderful picture, so vivid, so caring, you can feel the bond between you.

Some very clever rhymes, and internal stuff going on.

( caught red handed was great)

and the " street" style doesn't detract from it at all.

It's smart and funny and touching.

You have a lot of potential.

I hope you stick around and show us what you can do.

Thank you

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

DeepAsleepDeepAsleepalmost 20 years ago
Since-you-won't-mind.

I really liked this, the way I seem to like all your poetry, which reminds me of hot days in the city, sometimes - the feel of concrete baking under my ass and the sounds of a thousand people milling about. That's the flavor I take away from your poems.

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