All Comments on 'Melt Down'

like Deep Forest music...it has that transdance effect....nice pen...smiles/blue

Hey ryhme,

nice poem...<grin>

this was a tough one for me to work with. i couldn't even get anything to flow with it. you've done that. you've captured a mind when it is under a lot of duress. i love this little spot immensely:

slamming into hates hut.

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nicely done.........don

just a little to metaforic needs to be more litteral.

Scorching as always

RF, good work!

Thanks.

~ J