All Comments on 'Midnight Lovers'

M is not for mistake, but your first Lit poem is full of them.

Your poem contains quite a few awkward constructions,

as well as some misspellings ("entwinded" = "entwined")

There are a few verb/subject mismatches also.

And an overabundance of "of"s.

You should really get a friend to edit your work for you.

Find an editor and keep on reading and writing.

It doesn't matter what anyone says. It was perfect.