All Comments on 'Might You Ravage Me Instead'

what seems to begin as the same old unrequieted lovers poem, turns into some fresh lines and really good images. I truly enjoyed this work and hope you do submit more :)

good, descriptive poem, yes,,, in reality it's always better to "dream" than to "live out the dream"

the fine line between dreams and nightmares, in dreams, is always there, but crossing it is never assured

living out a dream, however, is crossing that line, surely!

i have astute friends in my corner: Socrates, Newton, and Thoreau! lol

The last few lines really punch it home. Nice one.

Tess