by WolvesTemptation
You wove your way through this with foreshadowing and an understanding of keeping a reader interested. Like this, it might be cut back a bit but solid read
Thank you for your insight!! I am glad you enjoyed it and yeah, it did turn out a tad longer than what I had hoped to write when I started it but my mind kick-started in between to change it lol
Interesting. Maybe goes a bit rambly but good word choices and concept.
Haha, Thank you so much for your comment :)
Glad you found it interesting@LeeseloovesPeter