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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Welcome to the poetry side

You wove your way through this with foreshadowing and an understanding of keeping a reader interested. Like this, it might be cut back a bit but solid read

WolvesTemptationWolvesTemptationover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you for your insight!! I am glad you enjoyed it and yeah, it did turn out a tad longer than what I had hoped to write when I started it but my mind kick-started in between to change it lol

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Interesting. Maybe goes a bit rambly but good word choices and concept.

WolvesTemptationWolvesTemptationover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Haha, Thank you so much for your comment :)

Glad you found it interesting@LeeseloovesPeter

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