by Curiouswife
Great poem. Reminds me, in some ways, of something I'd write.
Look forward to seeing what you write next, good poet.
It's sad that the first thing I noticed about this poem was the punctuation! I really enjoyed the rhythm you gave this with the spacing of commas and periods.
That said, the poem itself is lovely. I haven't had any coffee, and am refusing to have any, so any more intellectual thought than that just isn't coming today. :)
This poem made me feel warm reading it, a happy, sunshine kind of warm. Wonderful, thank you.
Like every one else I loved it and I was moved by it and I cheered for both of you wishing you every thing you'll need to be happy.