All Comments on 'Missing'

by tungtied2u

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fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
i know the feeling..

i've tasted this bitter pill..

you made it seem so lovely..making me wonder why it ended.

i keep trying to make my way through the poetry, but i'm in the proccess of a move, and a vacation of sorts so just not time now..

when i get settled in florida, there will be more time for reading and voting, i have read a few of yours though..

hang in there with the votes..

eventually it will pay off!

ryn..my daughters very suddenly..very abrubtly matured into a fine young lady..it was sort of intentional..to end it like i did..i suppose i could have written plenty about her growing..changing..but i made my point..well thought i had.

anyhow, thanks for the comment!

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Yes

Beautiful.

"The flexing of your calves

as I follow behind

Over moss covered boulders

to gaze emerald pools below"

Been there.....

and I remember the same simple thing

A wonderful piece

Thank you

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Nothing

missing here TT. Keep 'em coming.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Very,..

...very nice. A fine, clean read. Very enjoyable.

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