All Comments on 'monolith'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Clever

I like the contrast between the two images, asks questions in the reader's mind. What is more important? it asked me

Well crafted; a thoughtful, engaging poem

Mentioned in the new poem reviews

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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All those images of trying to solve such minor mysteries while the greatest mystery of all results in his walking down the hall. That's the mystery requiring the greatest time and exploration by a man ~ what goes on in the mind of a woman?

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
wonderful

Did I just step through the literary door to the Twilight Zone ~ mystical happenings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I admire.....

...the unassuming intelligence used in this poem. monolith in lower case is the perfect title. Congrats on a winner MinnieMo.

Tess - admiringly.

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 17 years ago
Waiting for the second shoe...

Intense and cohesive. Filled with existential angst, but you feel it, correction - mostly you can hear it! And the up and down movement between galactic images and intimate ones unites the universe into one reverberating and seemingly potentially highly unstable universe. Can someone turn down the volume?

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
Neat...

I'll leave him alone he's far too busy for me, 'Again'... Goodbye.

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