All Comments on 'Moonlight'

by Kundalinguini

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glheinzglheinzabout 3 years ago
reichlich..

..sensibel eingefaedelt. super.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

More than a little erotic!

Randi GrailRandi Grailalmost 20 years ago
Swoon

What a voice. What a ride.

"languid liquid ballet"

Growl.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Never short of Brilliant

A unicorn to your beauty-classic line! That first slide in is always best-So true! And this:

the chorus of moans rising into a scream,

as you buck underneath me you grip all around me

and as wet as you were you've now turned to cream.

My last thrust inside you on the edge of a dream

Damn, you make me hot. And your voice is the icing on the poetry cake. Very sexy.

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful~

The word wizard creates a lovely scene in poetry, nice poem.

tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Complete...

closure. Well versed..liked the way it gathered steam. I'm boiling! Thanks, Kunda

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