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great sensuality,

as always. you do this so well, RF.

Ya oughta be banned;

with such reads

everyone's liable to call in sick;

too sick to work, but not to play

and play...

super poem, reads like a short poem, despite the length!

and SENSUAL,

an image of burn into

the flesh,

that now lingers for

more ... more .. more..

LOL @ LeBroz!

Gotta go, calling in sick, *winks*

Got playing to do .. lol..

wonderful gurl !

-sGp-

tantalizing, sizzling read <grin> More pleaz! (~_*)

as that really sold it for me. i think though that line length could be looked at. especially with the single word lines. it has been said that if they are alone, they have to really stand out. i used to do a lot of this, it really stretches the poem out. it works better for shorter poems. i've gotten away from this practice when writing longer ones. purely an opinion...take it or leave it......nice....don

I love the word 'mayhemic.' Don't know if it is a real word, but it is now. For me anyway and you are responsible.

ty,bd