Morning

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Part 1 of the 5 part series

Updated 06/07/2023
Created 07/14/2012
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Prevailing grey – the morning comes on cold
and luminous above the brooding trees,
a jagged line on the horizon. Here

the icy water laps the limestone bed
and overhead a hint of colour creeps
into the night sky. Soon the dawn will be

upon the drowsy fields, when on shy wings
the silent night has gone and busy day
comes slowly in, a show of blues and greens

and then there's sun upon my back – the grass
still slightly wet, I'll make my shivering way
across the meadow to the sparkling stream

and splash cold water in my sleepy face
the better to enjoy what comes my way,
wide-eyed and happy with this brilliant day.

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Oldbear63Oldbear63about 10 years ago
You do this so well

This is what I normally TRY to do. I'll say it again - you are a wonderful poet.

pelegrinopelegrinoabout 10 years ago

5ed

After the "Graves" you brought back the smile in my face and hope in my heart.

Thanks.

CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Good. More than good.

More your normal style than Graves. It is that voice you have - slow, melodic, insidious.

You capture the movement of the new day, step by step.

Usual adjectives may apply.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 10 years ago
& your beautiful word pictures have made my Day ----

Brilliant too , Dem !!! 5-ed of course

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