All Comments on 'Morning'

Beautiful! You capture this tender moment perfectly

I enjoyed both of your poems today

'Ohhh' written from your perspective and 'Morning' from the outside looking in, both worked for me

In my head they belong together as a two part...an evenings much needed passion, followed by the next mornings gentle love making

Nicely done! Soft and passionate, gently loving. Yet still erotic. You can't ask for more. Thank you.

are way better than the "Nooners" TK U MLJ LV NV