All Comments on 'Morning Fog'

I love the way this flows, Sack. Thanks for the wonderful read! :)

with the rhyming stanzas. I occasionally toss those into my own poems. I notice that your last rhyming stanza strays from the AAAA pattern and goes with an AABB one. Which seems to work okay. :)

You have a real flair for poetry, and it shows here in this poem.

Fog creeps upon the land softly landing ~ the sunrise brings danger -the morning sun cuts through.