All Comments on 'Mothball Fleet'

bound for scrap and blades. TK U MLJ LV NV

Not many take on this form and write a poem that is both coherent and laden with meaningful imagery. I'd quibble with some of the punnctuation especially in line two, which I think should maybe be a'weep... But I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you.

Excellently formed and rhythmic poetry after such a long dearth - well done indeed. S.O.