- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Mountains of Truth
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Click hereI took him to the greatest vantage point
driving through the mountains
the evergreens iced over
a buck in the road
His eyes washed of the cool mist
as whispered words hit windshield
“I wonder what it would be like…
to be loved like that.”
My soul’s window crashed open
all detours leading here
a stormy, slippery passage
with bitter chill abounding
Dare he travel it?
Continuing, cordially, on the bluff
clarity defrosted all viewpoints
there were routes to venture up and down
or the spinning of wheels round and round
We went round and round
Holding our breaths to thwart fog
in the calm after the storm
I waited for a chance to leap
and he, for the buck in the road
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoI have to say that I found your previous work walking an ordinary trail many times. Here I see reflection, intrigue and strong emotional creativity. A poem to be reckoned with. Good work in all areas.
du lac~
LeBrozover 18 years agoAs usual, unusual
with levels of complexity
breathtaking when seen,
while for others, unseen...
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agofirst off I aplogize for those that left a pile of worded manure on your comment section but the poem is so full of beauty and frageranted that it shines above anyones mere opinion. It is a wonderfully written piece of literary art, an expression of thoughts in words that is so ...poetic <grin>
Curiouswifeover 18 years agoAuthorYou obviously haven't lived in an area populated by deer.
anonamouseover 18 years agowhile I tend to agree with Anonymous in Wherever about dear in the road and 30.06's
I don't cotton much to zero leavers with out names, shows a lack of guts
A damn 5 just for spite
Anonymousover 18 years agoA 30-06 would have gotten that darned buck out of the road in a heartbeat. It would have been a boon for the species too. Foolishly standing in the middle of the road when a car is bearing down on the animal is definitely not a survival trait the buck should pass on to any progeny. And a good shot would provide many fine meals for the travelers too.
Seriously, too much fluff, too little substance. Keep trying.
Reltneover 18 years ago. . . and wonderfully delicate as well.
Thank you for sharing your words.
You are know on my "must read" list of poets.
Jennifer Cover 18 years agoYour poem was mentioned in Saturdays Reviews,
Thanks for sharing.
~ JC
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoone of the most unique styles and displays of image I have ever seen... whatever you pen, places fragments of color and scene before me.. I am always in awe, GOD, I love being in AWE ! Thank you for sharing your gifts with us !
-sGp-
