by Curiouswife
one of the most unique styles and displays of image I have ever seen... whatever you pen, places fragments of color and scene before me.. I am always in awe, GOD, I love being in AWE ! Thank you for sharing your gifts with us !
-sGp-
Your poem was mentioned in Saturdays Reviews,
Thanks for sharing.
~ JC
. . . and wonderfully delicate as well.
Thank you for sharing your words.
You are know on my "must read" list of poets.
A 30-06 would have gotten that darned buck out of the road in a heartbeat. It would have been a boon for the species too. Foolishly standing in the middle of the road when a car is bearing down on the animal is definitely not a survival trait the buck should pass on to any progeny. And a good shot would provide many fine meals for the travelers too.
Seriously, too much fluff, too little substance. Keep trying.
while I tend to agree with Anonymous in Wherever about dear in the road and 30.06's
I don't cotton much to zero leavers with out names, shows a lack of guts
A damn 5 just for spite
You obviously haven't lived in an area populated by deer.
first off I aplogize for those that left a pile of worded manure on your comment section but the poem is so full of beauty and frageranted that it shines above anyones mere opinion. It is a wonderfully written piece of literary art, an expression of thoughts in words that is so ...poetic <grin>
As usual, unusual
with levels of complexity
breathtaking when seen,
while for others, unseen...
I have to say that I found your previous work walking an ordinary trail many times. Here I see reflection, intrigue and strong emotional creativity. A poem to be reckoned with. Good work in all areas.
du lac~