All Comments on 'Mourning the Loss of Poetry'

This at least is indentifiable, if you want to present horror, it can be (easier) done with contrast, too much you present apathy

The squealing track noise

of sanitarium shouts,

Personal quirk, I hate poetry with Poetry in the title

100 anyway

and feel you are in the dressing room, trying on styles. All the poems are good because you obviously can write, but I'm not sure I get the point unless the point is that you are on your own journey searching for a voice that's you. :-)

Madness in words. Ditch the midline capitals. They're distracting and make the lines choppy. I am one of your fans. Keep perfecting yourself. Only dead things stop growing.