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by SkinandSin
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twelveooneabout 11 years agowhat the anon is saying is
he liked this part:
I kneel before you
A goddess in supplication
Ravenous for your adoration?
My question is, why do you consider this poetry? Don't misunderstand this is better most, but is it a short, short story with line breaks?
The first stanza is great with a little editing
these are things to avoid:
altars beknownst
Hotly, wetly,
With hunger insatiable.
I 4ed
good luck with the anon
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SkinandSin@SkinandSinWhat I write is purely fiction, merely an exploration of my mind's small, dark crevasses - whatever genre I choose is not a nod of consent for the events or character motivations contained in my work. Call it an outlet, call it my imagined perversions, call it what you will. I...
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