All Comments on 'My Ass Is Grass'

You have some good stuff, funny. Even great stuff. But I got tired of reading about your ass midway though the poem. Maybe, it's just a guy thing.

..with a tendency to overwrite, even I found this went on too long, which is a real pity because there is some very amusing and funny stuff in this poem. Maybe there is a couple of funny poems in this poem with just a little more of your creativty which you obviously have.

Baggy assed jeans is not a substantial enough subject matter for a poem this long.

bb

yeah, I agree it went on a bit too long and you totally lost me when you wrote "tasting phlegm" gross.... IM sorry, that just gagged me, otherwise some funny lines, some very insightful words..

maria