All Comments on 'My Jealousies'

Great opening!

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My phrenic jealousies

Ripple through my mind

With solemn untruths

this really sets the stage for the poem. I wandered throught the green eyed emotions and felt the sad despair with the end... you did well inviting the reader into the destruction of a love through sexual/emotional cynicism. And ty for making me ref. the dictionary!

Your poem has been mentioned on the Sunday reviews..

Du Lac~

this poem took Me into a virtual pool of insecurity; a quicksand. Feeling you sink in helplessness in controlling the green eyed monster was so descriptive, it left Me thinking jealousy in itself is a form of addiction, isn't it? But it's one you can kick once you realize {as you do} that it is a destructive emotion. Thank you for the lingering effects this piece enabled Me to feel.

Vixxx