All Comments on 'My Souffle'

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TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
Great

Now I want a souffle.

Nicely done

Thank you

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
okay!!

I dont want a souffle, I want to BE a souffle, your souffle...oh my, this is a sexy poem, really tantalizing :)

JCSTREETJCSTREETabout 6 years agoAuthor
typo re 'it's'

Should be 'its'. This is an error (if not recognized as such) which infuriates both the literati and the International Council on Grammarsluttery alike

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