All Comments on 'Naked Linguine'

this was so steamy!

would i be pushing it with the puns if i said saucy?

oh wait thats right..naked linguine!

i liked this!xo, fawnie

this is brilliant and sexy!

except the last line and it just didnt sem to fit with the rest of the poem, in texture and word choice I mean.

I really did enjoy it, especially the pace and spacing of the lines, it has a really strong rhythm :)