All Comments on 'Nan is for Orgy!'

Uncle Pervey has the feel for meter down in his favorite poetry form,

and his rhymes are simple to keep.

Some beginning poets could do worse than to study rhythm with what he writes.

Weak lyrics can be carried by strong music. It is the same with poetry.

I would suggest that U.P. might consider shortening some of his poems.

Even eating icing tires your tongue when there is no cake underneath.