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by Senna Jawa

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RybkaRybkaalmost 17 years ago
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Thank you SJ for another enjoyable read!

You have caused me to learn a lot over the years.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
My mind's eye

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Senna JawaSenna Jawaalmost 17 years agoAuthor
a blemish but a good one :-)

Thank you, Rybka.

Anonymous, you have a point or perhaps one half of a point. "Mind's eye" by itself would be a blemish. Possibly this was the reason I hesitated for a couple of years about posting this poem here.

On the other hand, in the context of the stanza, "mind's eye" is integrated with the poem. "Mind's eye" is juxtaposed with the feet. The feet "see" the stones, while "mind's eye" sees the same stones as the sticking above the surface of the earth tops of the heads of bald men.

Possibly, this was the reason that I have posted "nature's coin" after all.

If you know more of such imaginative, poetic poetry then please, cite it, post the links, etc., I'll be grateful.

(And still, a blemish is a blemish :-)

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