by Lauren Hynde
This illustrated poem is both visually and mentally appealing. The text enhances the dreamy city nightscape nicely. Well done :)
This poem was composed almost three years ago so it's interesting to look back at how you've grown. My first thought is you were already pretty damn good! :D
Everything in the picture suggests movement, which balances well with the motion blur of the word "movement." In retrospect (cause I'm sure we discussed this privately before you submitted it lol), the font color could be brighter to stand out more and I think I like the singular "head" rather than "heads," which sounds a bit awkward. Other than that, it's excellent (and I was picky).
xxoo
very mice Lauren... a great mixture of texture color and wording combined to make an excellent peice.
A gorgeous callage with lines superimposed on a nocturnal lanscape. Done in a tasteful manner and considering the number of colors involved ~ still easy to read. Well Crafted.
Angeline's pretty well covered it. I'll just add that this is a demonstration that you've always tested the bounds of creativity.