All Comments on 'Neverending Signs'

by Lauren Hynde

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Easy on the eyes

This illustrated poem is both visually and mentally appealing. The text enhances the dreamy city nightscape nicely. Well done :)

AngelineAngelineover 18 years ago
Planet Portugal????

This poem was composed almost three years ago so it's interesting to look back at how you've grown. My first thought is you were already pretty damn good! :D

Everything in the picture suggests movement, which balances well with the motion blur of the word "movement." In retrospect (cause I'm sure we discussed this privately before you submitted it lol), the font color could be brighter to stand out more and I think I like the singular "head" rather than "heads," which sounds a bit awkward. Other than that, it's excellent (and I was picky).

xxoo

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 18 years ago
nice

very mice Lauren... a great mixture of texture color and wording combined to make an excellent peice.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Filmy.

A gorgeous callage with lines superimposed on a nocturnal lanscape. Done in a tasteful manner and considering the number of colors involved ~ still easy to read. Well Crafted.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Angeline's pretty well covered it. I'll just add that this is a demonstration that you've always tested the bounds of creativity.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
IF ALL YOU STATE

is at your command, Who needs you, TK U MLJ LV NV

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