All Comments on 'Night In Tunisia'

I thought your work was very romantic. Nicely done

Some of this is very interesting,

with some sharp, intriguing images.

But I find your middle stanza a bit confusing.

Why "satyred" and why a verb tense change?

Write us another like this one.

I like how you wrapped this up in the last two lines...nicely done.

~Merry