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by jd4george

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in todays reviews

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Wow

This is brilliant. Stark, moving and beautiful. One of my favorites, JD4G.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Another.....

...great poem. This is one of those cases where I'd like to know the story behind - the seed - of this poem. I love the last verse.....

"She is the morning

a tear hidden in whispers

soothing the bleeding wounds

letting the mind regain

forgotten sanity

Two hands

not quite touching

watch my chains fall away

I am free "

...but the whole is so good.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Do you

need me to tell you, these are great lines:

"scratching the star sparkle"

"chiding the eyes of memory"

Lose this:

"sparks turning into embers"

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