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plucked from his side. TK U MLJ LV NV

Interesting senryu here.

Interesting senryu here.

Everything is new ~ wide-eyed she approaches the marriage bed enthralled ~ as she awaits this magical moment.

more belated thank yous. I lost touch with the concept of simple thank-you notes. My apologies for poor form!

I do not see how the image and the words go together here-- is this talking about forced marriage?

I loved the illustration and the poem was simply brilliant; the play of words twisted inside my head.

Nice play on words!

wso

Man ray somehow this is deeply erotic and sort of scary at the same time. The ring seems so innocent but when paired with the words, well, its so alluring, the idea of being tied, hot

loved it!!