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Click hereYou've not said a word to me,
but with every breath you take,
I hear everything you say.
A little, embarrassed smile,
my skin, neck to forehead, gone crimson,
and never will I utter transparent words, again -
but I know with all my very being
that you too, listen with passion
to the things inside my head
and share those days I spent
rapturous, lingering, desiring -
all the nights I spent
scheming in vehemence
about how to prove I mean more
than every fucking one of them.
Stilled, afterglow, alone,
chilled tears like wine flow
offer a taste of bittersweet...
I'm never alone,
but you're never here.
I'll forever listen, tune in,
write it all down,
glimpse Heaven on the verge of suicide,
while you are preened and coddled,
but hiding, until it's time
for the tears to sell you,
and sell all I wish was mine.
And forever, on display
from my head's movie reel,
you... just you, up there -
You turned away,
made certain the black gloss
was delicately cradled in its stand,
and not another word
not another word
not another word...
I had to read it five times to understand (I'm a little thick)
First time I was ready to abandon it, till:
"than every fucking one of them." - let me know something was going on
great lines:
scheming in vehemence
glimpse Heaven on the verge of suicide,
bad line:
offer a taste of bittersweet...
You present the mixed emotions well and, I agree, you've got some great images there.
(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)
i found this very enjoyable reading / many interesting lines and images