All Comments on 'Not a Word'

i found this very enjoyable reading / many interesting lines and images

You present the mixed emotions well and, I agree, you've got some great images there.

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote)

I had to read it five times to understand (I'm a little thick)

First time I was ready to abandon it, till:

"than every fucking one of them." - let me know something was going on

great lines:

scheming in vehemence

glimpse Heaven on the verge of suicide,

bad line:

offer a taste of bittersweet...